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October 7, 2012
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Canon
Model
Canon EOS 600D
Shutter Speed
1/1024 second
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F/7.1
Focal Length
100 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Sep 26, 2012, 2:40:49 PM
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What a beautiful Morning by Einsilbig What a beautiful Morning by Einsilbig
What a beautiful Morning

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:iconwintersinxx:
This piece isn't terribly bad, but it's not terribly good either. It's plain,simple, and a bit boring, and doesn't capture the eye enough. The small window is all there is to see, making it impossible for the eye to really travel through the photo. What you should have done here, is left it in color because the pure white walls are almost a little blinding and a bit distracting. Even if the walls were a pure white to begin with, if it had some texture to it that was possibly hidden when turned black and white, this piece would have worked much better.
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Your use of the rule of thirds and sideways angle give the image an interesting dimension. By editing it to be black and white you have made the window stand out against the background, suggesting a void on an otherwise smooth surface.
The only issue I have is the title since it conjures up images of colour, contrasting with the actual photo. Maybe if you had left the plants in colour that would have given the title more solidarity.
Overall, this is a simple piece that just highlights the fact that photography doesn’t have to be complex to be beautiful.
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ArtByCher Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013   Traditional Artist
Featured :) [link]
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CarolynYM Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
I disagree with the critique. This photo captured my eye and I think it's unique:)
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:iconeinsilbig:
Einsilbig Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Iam happy you think so :)
Thanks for your opinion!
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hayley--jade Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
featured! : [link] :hug:
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crh Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nicht schlecht! :thumbsup:
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Einsilbig Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Danke dir ;)
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fal-name Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012   Photographer
wonderful artwork

featured on my journal => [link]

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:iconeinsilbig:
Einsilbig Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :)
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Blaumohn Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
Hello, you've been featured here: [link] . :butterfly:
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RichardLeach Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012   Traditional Artist
Wonderful restraint - works so well.
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