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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Wow. Beware !

... That was my first impression, looking at the thumbnail.

I saw concrete and warning stripes in a powerfully evocative composition. With an abstrat, almost-2D touch, which is always nice.

Then, zooming in, I saw this tentative sprout of a plant. And so I thought: "there's still hope". Icarus-ica put it very well, when commenting "resistance" !

Technically, I find the composition satisfactory, but the develop settings, if there are any, a bit dull. I would boost this picture's contrast, colors, curves, and everything that can be boosted, within the limits of preserving textures.

(I would also adjust the white balance to offset a slight brownish cast... Though I can't speak authoritatively on this, watching it on an uncalibrated laptop monitor.)

Hope this helps.