Just another autumn portrait (Part 1)

I enjoy this duo very much. I gave it a 4 for vision because the one on the left makes me think of rubbing your eyes when you first wake up and seeing the morning light all blurry. The photo on the right reminds me of the end of autumn, the end of death. Originality I have this a 3 because I've seen many works like this before, it's not that different, though it is good. Technique is a 2 because I feel like there could have been more, maybe having the yellow leaves of the right one defined instead of blurred. Impact I give it a 4 because I like the balance between the two. I not only have a feeling of loneliness and sorrow, but have a sense of warmth and community. Thank you for allowing me to critique this. Please understand that I do enjoy the picture, there are just a few things lacking.